The Lower Fens of Lochland

The Lower Fens of Lochland

The Lower Fens of Lochland

There lies among the lower fens of Lochland

A single path of safety through the mires

And there among the dismal swamps and quicksands

He stumbled, wheezing, bereft of horse and squire

Bearing naught but cold air in his sore lungs

His heart lifted to spy a distant fire.

She sat gayly, barefoot and bare legged

A beautiful contrast to one so ragged.


“My lady might I beseech thee for water?

For in these swamps there’s naught that’s fit to drink.

I see that thou art fairest of the daughters

Whom the gods have marked as Seiðrlinked 

For Star is bright, and Sun burns every hotter

But you their kin, must be the Moon, methinks.

For pale is the light that shines upon thee

And it grows, and fills a void, within me.”


She smiled then, a pale unearthly countenance

“I indeed have sustenance to give thee

For ale and water have I in abundance

And other drinks more potent and more sundry

But for my price I demand an audience

You must hear my song and sit beside me.

And if thou canst hear it and keep from weeping

I’ll make a gift of these for thy safekeeping.”


He nodded and set down his pack and sværd

She bade him move up closer to the embers

Then made for him a bed of pale gold hair

And bade him lay, and rest and but remember

His days when into darkness he had stared

Her voice rang out at once both warm and tender.

And singing in the old tongue of the heavens

She told a tale known only to the elven.


Her words were honey mixed with ancient longing

Her song was sadness tempered with the dawn

Her melody was sweet matronly fawning

Her chorus a seductress’s axiom

Her cadence sharp spoke oft of not belonging

Her rhythm more of poetry than song.

And all of this he heard but knew not of it

But in his roots he felt the Moon above him.


For he spoke naught of her divine language

But her words yet cut deeply regardless

Wan images sprang to life, a mirage

Memories of fever, fear, and distress

He’d seen her then, and felt her tender caress

As he gasped for air and toiled in madness.

And knew this was indeed not their first meeting

The Moon had come to him, and giv’n him healing.


She sang, and tears of wisdom poured from in her

She sang and tears of sorrow seeped from out him

She sang and tears of happiness covered her

She sang and gouts of understanding hit him

She sang and held him closely there unto her

She sang and all the recognition struck him.

Then silently they lay and held each other

Man and Moon, supplicant and lover.


“You’ve failed, I fear, for I but asked a favor

That you hear my song and weep not of it.”

She said these words, and beheld him quaiver

“Valhalla calls not to those who shrink from it.

A bargain tho I’ll strike for thy endeavors

Though this life so feebly do you covet.

Let go, let go, of worry and control

Die sword in hand with laughter in thy soul.”


There lies among the lower fens of Lochland

A single path of safety through the mires

And in that place the Moon walks hither often

Her song a painful, joyful, stark reminder

That thirst does not but bind one to the coffin

But fearlessness is born of something higher.

Weep not for the frightened and the timid

But weep instead for lives that go un-lived.

Author

  • Indy Allynson is a fantasy author writing out of the Salt Lake City, Utah area.